Interval - see the point of review with this piece.
More work had been done on the figures,
solid improvement that pleased me.
Overall it was unsatisfactory,
White with an emerald blush is applied over the red backdrop colour,
(you can see the still wet red has been picked up in the vigorous revision)
Where as this position is better (without the red)
It's not quite where I want to be
but I think it more likely I can get where I want to be from here (without the red)
So that's good.